Constructive Criticism

I'm Bringin' Feedback

I'm Bringin' Feedback

I stared at the paper before me, red marks covering its many pages.  The comments were long and accompanied by many words being crossed out.  Grammatical errors were pervasive, though they didn't seem to be at the time of the paper's writing.  Finally, I reached the end of what seemed like an endless commentary on me to find the biggest whammy of them all.